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Saturday, November 13, 2010

Chapter 2 of F's Dream

Chapter 2

" No Wainingmoon, choose another name, we already had so many Fly 's already" the clan leader tried to souns cheerful but failed."Why i have always loved that name, and when he's a warrior i hope he will be Flyclaw! that sounds so dangerous and powerfull."She remarked. A cold shiver ran trough Fallenkit and turned her blood to ice. No, this cannot be happening. there was only one thing on her mind: suicide."Are you crazy!"Brightmoon yelled at her. Everyone stared at her wondering what she tought.Everyone knew that Brightstar could read minds. Embarrassed she went to the nursery. "Hey where have you been, Did you see the kits? How big are they? Are they as big as us? Why did Brightstar snap at you? Did you-" " Shut up Pebblekit! Go share your tough with someone else. Pebblekit looked hurt, but right now she didn’t care. The only thin she could think of was Flykit. How dangerous can he be, What will he do? all question that no one could answer. She kept thinking about him while she  felt unconsciousness fall over her.
"Don't be afraid. Come forward." a cat wisperd.Of course, now i get dreams of Starclan cats. YAY. she thought sarcasticlly."Hello Fallenkit, I am Flyclaw. And this is Flywing. We are the ancients. "She froze. Fly's. Are they dangerous. "No we are not, we are here with Dreamsun."Hello young one, come have a seat. We have lots to tell you."
"Where are we?" She glanced around to see nothing but trees. So many. It looks like Treeclan territory. " We are in Thunderclan territory. A clan east of here. There is a cat. A few actually, that can help with the Flykit problem, so as I call it. You must go when your a warrior. So I have to send you to the future to teach you battle moves and hunting strategies. The quicker you learn the faster you can become a warrior . Go now, Head true those two trees."She pointed her tail to two massive hanging like trees. "Wait! Don't i get a say in this? "Fallenkit squealed "Of course. Go on" Flywing said to her. "What if I don't want this! What if I want to stay a kit! and live a normal life! I want to lay in the sun and play with my littermates! I want to stand up every morning and not fall back again! But is that possible? No!No its not! But I still have to go to the future to please you. I don't call that fair! ""Fallen kit life isn’t fair! You think I want to sit her everyday and call upon warriors to kill other warriors because of there dark path!?" Dreamsun snapped. "Fine, but after this, consider me a loner." She turned her back and went thru the hanging trees. I'm done. I hate my life.  Where am I? she thought seeing warriors all around her just before falling asleep again

. A voice whispered in her ear..Rusty…Firepaw…Fireheart…Firestar


“Wake up Cinderpaw! We have dawn patrol” Fallenkit jumed up and  stared at he she-cat and fluffed up her tail “Who are you? And who is Cinderpaw? She demanded in a growl.”You are so weird sometimes” The apprentice remarked.”Come on, Fireheart is waiting for us”She raced out of the den leaving Fallenkit alone in the weaved bramble bush. “Oh no, Dreamsun where am I?” “Shut up Cinderpaw! We want to sleep here.”Ï’m sorry, who are you?”she asked lightly.” A golden tom stood up and shooed her out of the den. Bristling she stood in a camp she seen before…in her dream. Cats.Everywhere.She did not know any of them. “Hi Cinderpaw, ready for our patrol?””a muscular orange tom asked her”F-Fire-Paw?””No Fireheart” “you’re the cat that supposed to help me!”” She Yowled”Rusty.Firepaw.Fireheart.Firestar! It’s you!””What’s going on here?!” A voice ringed above all the other murmurs of confusing cats. “Bluestar I don’t know what has gotten into my apprentice.” “I’m not your apprentice! I’m Fallenk-paw! A apprentice from Lakeclan west from here. I was sent by Dreamsun to destroy what will fly from a claw. A prophecy. “Bluestar- I’m really sorry about this I will make sure she gets punished for this” No wait!” Bluestar tipped her head to the side. “Did she sent you?” “Yes, Dreamsun and Brightmoon. My clan leaders” “Oh no. This is not good.Flyclaw has returned”  



Saturday, October 16, 2010

Chapter 1 of F's Dream


Chapter 1
This time I will do it! She woke up with a start. One. Two. Three! She stood up ready to find her balance and not fall like every other time she wakes up. She pulled her self up, but she didn’t have enough strength and fell back down.
"Why am I so useless"! she cried.
"Don't worry Fallenkit, you’ll get it next time" her brother, Flamekit tried to cheer her up. He was always there by her side. But lately he's only playing with Pebblekit.                                                                           "No I won't! I'll always fall back down. That's why my name is Fallenkit! Because I always fall!" "Now that's not true, Fallenkit. You know very well that your father and I chose that name because when you three went to your wild goose chase you fell down the waterfall and almost drowned. Thank Starclan Rarepelt was there to save you".                  She knew that their mother, Poppydawn was right. “But then why do I always fall?" "We have spoken to Crescentmoon about it and she said it's your lack of stamina. Once your an apprentice, you will get lots of training everyday so you’ll build up mussels that will hold you up. "But then, why can Flamekit and Pebblekit stand up?”” Because there toms" "Your lying! You all are! There’s something wrong with me and you don't know what!"She spat. "No were no-"  "Save it Pebblekit, just leave me alone!” She ran back to the nurserycave and went to the secret escape. Only kit's knew that. The tunnel went passed the leaders den up to the rock that form the waterfall. Here. I'm finally alone. No one cares about me. I’m just the freaky kit.
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You could hear the waterfall in the distance and cats meowing. I hate them!. They hate me! I wish I was never born! “ now don’t think that little one, it will come one day”. That was Brightsun. Of course, I forgot she could read thoughts. She was One of the Chosen to kill the twoleg hunter. It  was before she was born. She heard stories about it, that there was this twoleg with long things that killed cats with one shiny ball. She , Ashleaf who died along with Archstar, who was Archspine were the Ones. “I never knew , you came up here often. I thought I was the only one.” Well your not , so deal with it. “Don’t be so rude, I’m your clan leader you know that right?” “How could I forget?” She asked sarcastically. “Look Fallenkit, I know your upset right now, but look at reality, you’ll get over the fase.” ‘No I wont! I will always fall again” “Look,  you where chosen, to defeat whatever it is to fly from a claw. So you are special.” “What do you mean?” “Well, along time ago, our ancestors, Dreamsun and Brokenmoon, were given a prophecy. Brokenmoon got it first and it was something like ; Beware, you will not expect what will fly from a claw. First they thought it was a warrior named Flyclaw, but he died in battle. And short after he died, his mate, Tigereyes had her kits and named one of them Flykit. So then they thought that that was the danger. But he was always loyal and died of old age. And until now, we still have no warriors named Fly. And last but not least, Dreamsuns prophecy was; she will fall and rise. She will defeat every last flying claw and break every last rule to get there. And we think it’s you.” “No, it’s not. You’re mistaken. First I am useless. Second there aren’t any fly- whatevers in this clan and- any clan actually and third I am a kit! Not a warrior. I m not even allowed to get out of camp let alone kill someone. So, I’m sorry. Go persuade another kit. Maybe they’ll fall for it.”“Brightstar! Brightstar!” a terrified yowl clank. “Her kits are coming! Her kits are coming! Wainingmoon’s kits are coming!” “I’m coming. Follow me”She ordered. Fallenkit followed silently after Brightsun. The she cat had already given birth to two kits and was pushing the last one out. She let a loud moan after having a few spasms. “Come on, you can do it! Just one more push” Her sister Crescentmoon, the medicinecat was cheering her on. She yowled one more time while she pushed and it was done. Tree beautiful kits, two female one male.”What are you going to name them.? “Brightstar asked. “The light brown one Frogkit, The beige one Willowkit and the dark brown tom Flykit.”

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

My Warriors Fanfic


Fallenpaw's Dream

Welcome to my fanfic!
I'm new at the Blogger so please exuse my mistakes

LakeClan

Leader
Brightstar - Light brow tabby she-cat with hazel eyes                  

Deputy
Moonshine - Massive white grayish tom            

Medicine Cat
Crescentmoon - lightbrown she-cat, twinsister of Wainingmoon            

Warriors
Blackclaw - black she-cat with long claws and blistering green eyes
Apprentice - Snowpaw
Riverscent - Blue gray tom
Dewpearl - Pearl colord she-cat with brown paws
Cloverfield - Ivory she- cat with black stipes
Firebush - Pure orange tom with blue eyes
Rainshiver - Brown tabby tom that's afraid of rain
Apprentice - Honeypay
Cloudhail - White tom with gray specks with amber eyes
Wainingmoon - lightbrown she-cat, twinsister of Crescentmoon
Apprentice - Jagpaw
Duskmouth - Darkbrown she-cat with a lightbrown muzzle

Appentices
Jagpaw - Darkbrown tabby tom
Snowpaw - White tom with long tail
Honeypaw - lightbrown she-cat

Queens
Ashstripe - Darkgray she-cat
Kits - Wavekit, Icekit
Poppydawn - Gray she-cat
Carrying Firebush's kits

Elders
Skyring - White tom with darkbrown ring around neck          

TreeClan          

Leader
Archstar - Reddish brow tom          

Deputy
Dawnwisper - Light gray she-cat             

Medicine Cat
Mayflower- Yellowish she - cat
Apprentice - Cottonpaw
 

CaveClan              

Leader
Crowstar - Black tom with only one white speck on paw

Deputy
Sandheart - Sand colord tom

Medicine Cat
Poppyleaf - White tom with blue eyes

Cats Outside Clans
    
Poopie - Brown kittypet
Julie - Tortoishell kittypet
Andes - Small white kittypet                
  


Prologue                                                                        

''I don't know what to do Highsun. I need your help. No don't leave me here! I need you!" Brokenmoon woke with the dream in his head. The big muscular brown tabby was scared of the prophecy he was told.I don't know what to do, he tought to himself. His mate Dreamsun was already awake.Dawn patrol. It was the clan tradition that there where two leaders : a female and a male. Leaf-bare is finally over and New-leaf was beginning. Waterclan suffered allot this leaf-bare. Rarepelt got green chough and Winterlove drowned. At least today we'll be having a warrior ceremony today.His toughs of the dream disappeared when He joined the hunting patrol. He pricked his ear and heard a dormouse.He went step for step carefully not to step on anything that might break and in a split second he grabbed it and killed it with a soft blow.

The hunting patrol came back just before sunhigh. He also caught a vole and a water shrew . He place it carefully on top of the fresh kill pile. He scoped the camp. He was comforted by the sound of the water fall. The camp was an island between  a stream that climbs a steep hill and comes to a waterfall  that becomes a deep river with  brambles on the inside of the camp for protection. The hill is on the inside flat with dens for the apprentices that are in the left corner and the leaders' den are all the way up on the highest ledge.Theres a log in the infront of the wall called the Great Log, thats where the leaders address there clan. Theres a cave behind the water fall where the medicinecat den is. The elders den is on the left side of the island next to the apprentice den and is made ot of a log that is broken in two and a holly bush for shelter.Two of the oldest elders sleep in the logs and the others sleep under the bush.  The nursery is next to the medice its a old bagger set next a huge rock that shelers the hole from wind rain and snow. And the warrior den is just a bramble thicket that provides shadow and is quite large.
'There you are, I've being looking everywhere for you' greeted Dreamsun .
'It's time for Flypaw and Rosepaw two get there warrior names'.Brokenmoon nodded.
'Let's go;  he added before padding of to the Great Log after his mate.
'Let all cats old enough to climb the wall come to the clearing for a clan meeting.'
Many cats were already there.He could see Flypaw getting cleaned up by his mother Ashwisker.Mothers! Dreamsun started speaking.
'Flypaw and Rosepaw come forward'. 
The two cats came forward one at a time with there mentors. Flypaw with his mentor Sunshine, and Rosepaw with hers, Patchfrost.
Brokenmoon started 'Do you, Flypaw promise to uphold the warrior code for the rest of your life and sacrifice yourself for your clan'. Oh no,  what should I call him...Flyheart, Flypelt, Flynose?
'I do' called the apprentice.'Then from this day forward, you will be know as Flyclaw, for your streght that you have and the wisdom.'Now Rosepaw" This time it was Dreamsun who spoke, the female leader.
'Do you promise to uphold the warrior code for the rest of your life and sacrifice yourself for your clan' 'I do'She responded immediately.
'Then from this day forward you will be called Rosefoot, because at your second moon you broke your left foot but you just kept on going.'All the cats started yowling 
"Flyclaw! Rosefoot! Flyclaw! Rosefoot!''
 Suddenly Brokenmoon saw a strange cat walking towards him. A silver cat that apparently no one else could see."Beware Brokenmoon, you will not expect what will fly from a claw. "